summer haiku

July 22, 2008

summer evening
the humming bird feeds
impatiens flutter

spun in ice
the cream we stole from the barn
cools our night

thunderheads rumble
softly in the distance
raindrops

Posted in Miscellaneous, Poetry, Senryu, haiku, summer, writing |

2 Responses to “summer haiku”

  1. Becky Says:
    July 22, 2008 at 10:13 pm

    Beautiful.

  2. qazse Says:
    July 23, 2008 at 11:53 pm

    thank you

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